To celebrate the completion of the Twelfth Draft of my WIP, I have posted the First Chapter on another page in this blog.
UPDATE: The first five chapters are now viewable at Amazon – just click the link
If you have any thoughts, ideas, criticisms or if something simply doesn’t make sense to you, I’d be very happy to hear your feedback.
It would be useful to hear your opinions as to whether the first chapter ‘draws’ the reader to continue reading.
I won’t repeat any previous comments on that aspect at this time as they may ‘steer’ your opinions.
I am very close to a decision on whether I will publish this on Amazon, (UPDATE: Now published – see link above) rather than wait a whole year (or even longer) to see it as a paperback.
This means that any errors need to be expunged (I’ve always loved that word!) and you, my fellow writers, may be that final defence against humiliation and midnight rewrites.
Enjoy, critique and above all, keep writing!