It has taken many, many months of hard work, but the revised version of CoA (Kindle, ePub and Kobo) is finally ready to be shown to the world. The paperback is due to follow shortly afterward.
My editor, Tara Shaner and I have been bouncing the MS back and forth across the pond since July, and now, finally, we are both happy with the result. It’s fifty or so pages shorter, two characters lighter and a great deal tighter than before.
I’ve learned a great deal during the process of revision (old hands will nod sagely at this point, but bear with me).
An edit is not just about spelling and grammar. It’s as much about the flow as it is about the structure. It’s about plot threads and loose ends; developing characterisations as well as removing characters who either complicate or lend nothing to the plot. Pace, language and humour are also essential elements of an engaging MS.
I began 2013 with the certainty that after scores of read-throughs, my MS would be error-free and ready to roll.
No need for an editor, I thought.
I can do English. I know how to use punctuation.
I was so naive.
I’ve learned, by taking this long way around, that it really does take an outside and professional eye to spot repetitive or erroneous patterns in a Manuscript – and to offer solutions. A writer can become settled and overly accustomed to the flow of the story and (I have caught myself doing this at times) can tend to ‘read’ the story, rather than edit it objectively.
Be in no doubt that you may begin to question your own skill as a writer as overused words, inappropriate dialogue tags and pointless character actions are unearthed before your disbelieving eyes. ‘Did I really write that? What was I thinking?’
But a good editor should also indicate the places where your work shines, where the humour tickles and where the pace grips the reader. And whilst human nature will automatically remember the bad over the good, an indicator of competent, nay, great work will help to soften the blow – as well as encouraging the writer not to throw in the towel.
I know where my towel is. 😀
So the re-launch is imminent. Watch this space and if you can, please join me on my Author page for some fun, frolics and giveaways on Friday, 28th February.
Feb 13, 2014 @ 15:35:25
This gives so much insight into the process of writing a novel. Absolutely thrilled to see this information. I have about three books I just ordered to read, but will put yours on my list to get soon after I am done!
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Feb 13, 2014 @ 15:38:42
Thank you – I’m glad my trials and tribbleations shed some light on the crazy process of writing. 😀
It’a lot like building a car… you try stuff which fits together and gives a pleasing whole. If people laugh at your styling, you have the option of wheeling your work back into the garage – or making a statement with it.
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Feb 13, 2014 @ 16:03:31
As non-mechanical as I am, I can actually understand that analogy. Well said, indeed.
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Feb 11, 2014 @ 20:30:38
I have learned more from you, Andrew, than you from me. Excited for this re-release! Toodle pip!
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Feb 11, 2014 @ 14:50:34
Good to see you back and to find out why you’ve been away. Very excited about the re-launch!
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Feb 11, 2014 @ 14:55:44
I have sorely neglected my blog since late last year – despite my resolution to post regularly. Hopefully now that I’m writing again, rather than sitting with my head up my MS 😀 I will have some suitable content to publish.
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Feb 11, 2014 @ 14:49:04
I can relate. It is gut wrenching, but well worth the trouble. I will be watching your re-launch with interest.
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Feb 11, 2014 @ 14:54:01
John
It DOES require a great deal of patience, doesn’t it? But now, at the other end of the journey, I can see that you are correct.
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