3. Finally seeing the light of day – ‘A Fury of Angels’

early What follows is a chronology that’s best read from the bottom up…

Use the images as markers – they separate the months from each other.


The Robin Hood Tower. Where this story begins

November 2015

Riding on the back of NaNoWriMo 2015, I added a sizeable chunk of story to FoA and brought it to a conclusion at 59k. It’s now a similar size to VoA, and once the edits begin, may swell further. It was sad to write the final paragraph of Sara, Michael and Magda’s adventures, although there is plenty more they can do yet. Sneak peeks during the story hint at future events, which could take their adventures decades into the future. It will all depend on feedback from the readers.

August 2015

Another burst of speed has seen the total rise to 36k. This is around the half-way point towards my projected total, although If I’m completely honest, I could easily steer my characters toward the bad guy and cap the whole story off at 40k. But that would make the book disappointingly short. My characters need to do a whole lot more suffering yet.  

Mid June 2015

I know, it’s been some time since I posted any progress. My ghostwriting projects, the work which brings in the $$, has been taking up most of my time. It’s been a much-needed source of income, since my injury last year has knocked big chunks off my salary. In a brief moment of inspiration today (Sunday), I managed to write another few hundred words, taking me to 14,600.

Not much, considering I’d set myself a provisional target of 80k, but baby steps are better than no steps.

Mid April 2015

Booked my editor Tara for January 2016, forcing myself into a deadline situation. Now I MUST be finished by the end of this year. I’m looking forward to completing the trilogy, not because I want to be rid of it, but because it will represent another milestone in my fledgling career.

Mid March 2015

8,500 words done. Ideas are presenting themselves nicely. The unexpected changes to my POV character from the second book (Michael) have shifted the story sideways. I’ve also reverted to Sara Finn as POV character, as she was in the first book, something which, in the long term, will be critical to the story.

Early March 2015

Work on FoA is going well. I’m managing to fit in time between ghostwriting projects (and submissions to the BBC as it happens) to roll the story out. As with the previous two books, I know exactly how I want the story to end, and all the characters are being ‘herded’ towards that end.

Also, as with the other books, the characters are suggesting adventures I hadn’t originally conceived. Team effort?

I’m aware I need to fit in a midpoint of the story, which is the 600 word sample (see below). At some point, Michael and Sara need to meet up with the Army in York. But all is not as it seems with the military…

February 22nd 2015

The first 1,000 words are down! This doesn’t include the 600 words I penned as a sample at the end of ‘A Vengeance of Angels,’ although I’m hoping to incorporate that particular passage into the story at some point. The sample has been useful in helping to steer the narrative, giving me a couple of ideas I hadn’t previously considered.

January 2015

A new year, and it begins with me spending a day in York with a lady who is very, very similar in appearance to my main character, Sara Finn. With the assistance of the Yorkshire Ambulance Service, Sara comes to life and sits in an Ambulance, peers into a Rapid Response Vehicle and gets frightened by a hooded bad guy (okay, it’s me) for the sake of art. Update: Video to be released September 16th 2015.


8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. nutsfortreasure
    Dec 22, 2012 @ 03:48:30

    I did too! This is your luck day!!!

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

    come get your STAR!





    • Andrew Toynbee
      Dec 22, 2012 @ 08:48:23

      Thanks – but I’m not actually listed… :(




      • nutsfortreasure
        Dec 22, 2012 @ 13:43:21

        How can that be I clicked on your link to send it to you I shall see what is going on :(


      • nutsfortreasure
        Dec 22, 2012 @ 13:47:35

        Sorry I was trying to delete doubles and maybe I clipped yours but it is on there NOW!!!!


      • Andrew Toynbee
        Dec 22, 2012 @ 21:59:01

        Thank you, thank you, thank you. So many new blogs to explore there too!!!


      • nutsfortreasure
        Dec 22, 2012 @ 22:03:30


        I hope for your Christmas gift you will click on them a little at a time and EXPLORE :)

        You are very welcome I swear you were there or I never would have gotten the message to you :)

        It was a very easy fix



      • Andrew Toynbee
        Dec 22, 2012 @ 22:07:38

        I will explore indeed. That, I’ve found, is the best way to build my list of blogs that I follow – by recommendation.
        Have a great Christmas. See you on the other side!


      • nutsfortreasure
        Dec 22, 2012 @ 22:13:58

        Merry Christmas Andy and yes I am hoping for this world of ours a much more peaceful New Year



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